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    TOEFL essay รบกวนให้คำแนะนำหน่อยค่ะ

    A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay?

    Bangkok, the capital city of Thailand, is a city that I have lived for 26 years. This city amazes people both Thais and foreigners in terms of convenient transportation, luxurious shopping complexes, historical places, and beautiful sightseeing at night. Meanwhile, pollution is the major problem that makes people dislike. For a person who plans to move to my city, I believe that he might like Bangkok for its outstanding characteristics and dislike its only one weakness.

    Bangkok is the only one city of Thailand that consists of 2 kinds of high technological transportation types which are sky train and subway train. These trains enable to help people travel from one place to another place conveniently; people can eliminate traveling time in the street road. Moreover, there are many luxurious shopping complexes along Sukhumwit Road., Orchard Road of Thailand. All kinds of brand name product are available at most of the department stores. For example, cosmetics of Shiseido, clothes of Pieer Cardin or even handbag from Louis Vuitton. If he wants to go to any shopping place in this road, he can go there easily with sky train.

    Apart from two characteristics mentioned above, he certainly enjoys visiting Bangkok historical sites at day time. Some historical sites are totally Thai style such as The Grand Palace whereas some are mixed style which is blended between Thai’s and Brahmist’s such as Sao Ching Cha. Meantime, he must feel happy with the beautiful light around the city at night.

    Nevertheless, due to its being capital city, pollution problems such as population crowding, air pollution and voice pollution are undeniable problems. People and cars are crowded in the center of the city especially at day time. This crowding also leads to be severe air pollution and voice pollution which are ranked the top 10 cities in the world that has severe problems. Children aged lower than 12 are recommended not to visit this city.

    In summary, planning to move to Bangkok certainly causes him both like and dislike. On the one and, he might enjoy in the developed infrastructures and the beautiful sightseeing in Bangkok. On the other hand, he might be frustrated with the city’s pollutions. However, if he can use the benefit my city’s facilities and adapt himself in order to get effect as less as possible. Bangkok should be the city that makes him happy. ( 394 word 1 hour)

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